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Offline prasun

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Kharakwasla
« on: May 12, 2012, 02:39:18 AM »
Went to kharakwasla cycling last sunday.... here are some shots...

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Re: Kharakwasla
« Reply #1 on: May 12, 2012, 06:50:04 AM »
Liked 2nd and last one. Nice compo in last but if you could have positioned the duck more towards right and included the line which is created by those vegetation in left of frame, it would have been more appealing.
3rd: seems underexposed.

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Re: Kharakwasla
« Reply #2 on: May 12, 2012, 03:56:12 PM »
Nice series. Liked the first one!

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Re: Kharakwasla
« Reply #3 on: May 12, 2012, 04:07:27 PM »
hi

Nice series. Liked the first one!

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Re: Kharakwasla
« Reply #4 on: May 12, 2012, 08:02:34 PM »
Nice details on the lapwing in the first shot...and the 3rd is underexposed...the 3rd could be a great shot if the exposure is set properly...
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Re: Kharakwasla
« Reply #5 on: May 13, 2012, 02:51:39 AM »
good pix....in third, u cud clone out the white line behind the bird.....slightly lighten it in pp....for other purposes.

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Re: Kharakwasla
« Reply #6 on: May 13, 2012, 07:13:12 PM »
Thanks everybody.
@ Toofan: Great critic, and I agree with you in all cases but the last one. There were other destructions in the foreground which I could not avoid.
@ Gopalji: I shall try cloning and also fiddling with the levels to improve the exposure.

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Re: Kharakwasla
« Reply #7 on: May 18, 2012, 02:28:18 AM »
As per your suggestions.


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