a panorama for your critique

[sabera]

hi tried my hand at panorama  --an abandoned mine-- a most serene spot close to mysore please c&c  regards sabera

[bippz]

Harsh light is taking the fun away.
Regards

[Point Blank]

nice framing, but the pic needs a little more contrast!

[lightwave]

Technically it seems fine except the black areas in top right and bottom left.
However the lighting is depriving the image of the contrast and impact as Bippz and Point Blank stated.

[sabera]

hi gentlemen
thanks a lot for your guidance and suggestions. yes the light was too bright after all it was midday it was very mild when i left for the place but when i reached the place it was too bright. i am sure i will present you with a better pic next time
sabera